Hi Blake! I thought your elevator pitch was great! You included a lot of information and analysized each of your points very well. However, you should probably just stick to one solution to your problem, and explain why it would be better than other solutions. Great work on your video!
Hi Blake! Really great job with this! I do not live on Fraternity row, however I do have one or two friends who do and they often complain about the terrible parking. I thought you had some great solutions to the problem!!! great job. Maybe we should be a parking garage to help. Just a thought!
Hi Blake, I think your idea is great and there is a big need for more parking spaces on Fraternity Row. I liked your elevator pitch and the enthusiasm you showed for the idea. One suggestion I have is to film the elevator pitch in an area with more light and without a lot of background noise. Other than that, nice work and I hope more parking becomes available.
Hi Blake! I thought your elevator pitch was great! You included a lot of information and analysized each of your points very well. However, you should probably just stick to one solution to your problem, and explain why it would be better than other solutions. Great work on your video!
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ReplyDeleteReally great job with this! I do not live on Fraternity row, however I do have one or two friends who do and they often complain about the terrible parking. I thought you had some great solutions to the problem!!! great job. Maybe we should be a parking garage to help. Just a thought!
Hi Blake, I think your idea is great and there is a big need for more parking spaces on Fraternity Row. I liked your elevator pitch and the enthusiasm you showed for the idea. One suggestion I have is to film the elevator pitch in an area with more light and without a lot of background noise. Other than that, nice work and I hope more parking becomes available.
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